手把手教你四六级作文

第一章段落结构的问题

第二章句子的问题

滥用从句

不会使用短语

不会使用并列结构

下笔时缺乏考虑

It引导的从句达到泛滥的程度

需要使用从句的情况

第三章在写作中经常用错的表达

平行结构

one和ones被滥用

意义过于模糊的几个词

写作时应该尽量避免使用的词

第四章急需掌摊的灰达

第五章习作评改

四级作文

Passages1WelcometoourClub

Passages2ontheSpringFestivalGala

Passages3StudentsSelectingnmirLecturers

Passages4VolunteerRecruitment

Passages5ShouldtheUniversityCampusbeOpentoTourists?

Passages6HappyTeachersDay

Passages7MyMostFavoriteProgram

Passages8TheWorldIsGettingSmaller

Passages9ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively

Passages10HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview

Passages11WhatWouldHappenIfThereWereNoPower?

Passages12Traveling

Passages13Books

Passages14BicycleinChina

Passages15Cooking

Passages16Television

Passages17CanMoneyBuyHappiness?

Passages18AdvantageofaJobInterview

Passages19TheTwo-dayWeekend

Passages20GlobalShortageofFreshWater

Passages21PracticeMakesPerfect

Passages22GettingtoKnowtheWorldOutsidetheCampus

Passages23HarmfulnessofFakeCommodities

Passages24Do"LuckyNumbers"ReallyBringGoodLuck?

Passages25DontHesitatetoSay"No"

Passages26HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation

Passages27IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?

Passages28PositiveandNegativeAspectsofSport

Passages29TheStudentsofChina

Passages30Love

Passages31TheEverGrowingWorldPopulation

Passages32UndergroundCities:AreTheyPossible?

Passages33LivingintheCityorintheCountry

Passages34SmokingandHealth

Passages35Computers

Passages36Education

Passages1TheCelebrationofWesternFestivals

Passages2ShouldOneExpectaReward

WhenDoingaGoodDeed?

Passages3TravelingAbroad

Passages4ALetterDecliningAJobOffer

Passages5SayNotoPiratedProducts

Passages6HealthGainsinDevelopingCountries

Passages7PositiveandNegativeAspectsofSports

Passages8ArePetsGoodforMankind?

Passages9TeenageSmoking

Passages10Busesvs.PrivateCars

Passages11ShouldParentsBuyComputersforTheirKids

Passages12Advertisements

Passages13FamilyPlanning

Passages14CityLifeVs.CountryLife

Passages15Failure

Passages16ALetterWelcomingYourSchoolmate

Passages17HowDoIFinanceMyCollegeEducation

Passages18ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively

Passages19DontHesitatetoSay"No"

Passages20Do"LuckyNumbers"ReallyBring

GoodLuck?

Passages21MyViewonFakeCommodities

Passages22MyViewonJob-Hopping

Passages23HasteMakesWaste

Passages24WhyDoITaketheCollegeEnglish

TestBand6?

Passages25ShouldFirecrackersBeBanned?

Passages26WealthandHappiness

Passages27FightingAgainstCrimes

Passages28EconomicDevelopmentandPollution

Passages29FastFood

Passages30Travelling

Passages31FightingAgainstCorruption

Passages32ChinasEntryintotheWTO

Passages33SuccessintheBidforOlympicGames

Passages34JobInterviews

Passages35TrafficJam

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