有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

　　1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　When I first learned to write in English, I met many difficulty. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese end tried to translate something into English. My teacher advised me to keep a diary. I followed her advice but put down about 100 words each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simply English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said what the story was a good one. Their words were a great encourage to me.

IV. 书面表达

　　假如你是你校英语报社的编辑Mr. Wang，现在小冬因不善于交流在交友过程中遇到了困难，请你用英语给他写一封回信，给他提出一些建议和意见。

　　注意：

　　1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头和结束语已为你写好，但并不计入总词数。

Dear Xiaodong，

　　I'm sorry you are having trouble in making friends.

　　Yours，

　　Mr. Wang