修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词

　　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　　I used to be a fat girl, weighs 80 kilos. I was afraid of having PE classes because I was often laughed on the playground. At first, I decided to eat less in order to lose the weight. However, just several days late, I began to feel tired and can't concentrate in class. My parents took me to see our doctor, that told me what was not a good idea to eat only a little. Instead, he advised me to eat a balanced diet but encouraged me to work out every day. I followed his advices and gradually I became very slimly.

六、提纲类作文

　　　52．假定你是李华。你校交换生 Linda热衷于参加慈善活动（ charity），你想邀请她本周日一起去孤儿院(orphanage)做慈善。请你给她写一封邮件，内容包括:

　　　1．写信目的;

　　　2．活动内容;

　　　3．前往方式。

　　　注意：1．词数100左右；

　　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Linda,

　　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　　Yours,

　　　Li Hua