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Yesterday evening I went to the supermarket. When I was about to enter I see an old lady with deformed hands calling me. At the first, I got afraid but then I decided to go ahead and find out that she wanted. She asked me about some money. She said I hadn't eaten anything since that morning. I gave her some money and she happy went to a food stand and had her food. It made me realize we go shopping without think twice then forget all about it in a few day. However, there are people don't even have money to get a meal. I hope to spreading kindness to those in need in any way possible.
【答案】Yesterday evening I went to the supermarket. When I was about to enter I see an old lady with
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deformed hands calling me. At the first, I got afraid but then I decided to go ahead and find out that
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she wanted. She asked me about some money. She said I hadn't eaten