删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

Now many students had iPods and think it is a fashion to use them. By using a iPod, we can listen to music and download lots of learning materials. Clear, it is of great use to our study. Some students, instead of, bring their iPods to the classroom and listen to music with earphones，which make the teachers and other students badly upset. Some of them even waste time in class played video games.

In my opinions, we should make good use iPods to get success in study. The classroom is a place when students study. Besides, the school should make a rule to guide we students to use iPods properly.

第四节 书面表达（满分25分）

　　近年来大城市交通拥堵严重，影响了人们的生活和经济发展，对此人们十分抱怨。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点用英语给报社写封信。

1.交通现状及影响；

2.提出改进建议；

3.希望建议被采纳。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic.

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