The Coming­of­age Ceremony is really a good chance for students to express our gratitude to our beloved parents as well our patient teachers. Meanwhile, it will turn a new page in our life, means we have grown up and it is time we more responsibilities for the family and society.

　　I'd appreciate it if you could come and share the unforgettable moment with us. I'm looking forward to your !

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　难项分析：

　　第四处：expect→expected　考查被动语态。expect与Senior Three students之间为逻辑上的动宾关系，因此应用被动语态，故把expect改为expected。

　　第七处：that→which　考查定语从句的引导词。that不能引导非限制性定语从句，且引导词指代主句整体内容，故只能用which。

　　第八处：shoulder前加should或者shoulder→shouldered　考查虚拟语气。"It is (high) time that＋从句"结构中，从句谓语动词要用过去式或用"should＋动词原形"，且should不可省略。