Ⅳ.短文改错

Dear Lisa，

　　I'm glad to receive your letter asked about the present holiday life of Chinese students. Learning together with entertainment still take up most of our time. Besides, we often help our parents with the housework or farm work, that makes us realize how hard we work every day and develop a great love for work. Meanwhile, we take active part in social activities, such as voluntary work. We went out to the streets to collect rubbishes or to the hospitals to cheer up the sick children. We try our best to help those who are in need or make our hometown a lot of more beautiful. We find greatly pleasure in these activities.

　　Yours，

　　Li Ming

　　答案：

Dear Lisa，

　　I'm glad to receive your letter about the present holiday life of Chinese students. Learning together with entertainment still up most of our time. Besides, we often help our parents with the housework or farm work, makes us realize how hard work every day and develop a great love for work. Meanwhile, we take active part in social activities, such as voluntary work. We out to the streets to collect or to the hospitals to cheer up the sick children. We try our best to help those who are in need make our hometown a lot more beautiful. We find pleasure in these activities.

　　Yours，

　　Li Ming

　　难项分析：

　　第二处：take→takes　此处together with后的名词不影响谓语动词的数，句子的主语是learning，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式，故改为takes。

　　第七处：rubbishes→rubbish　rubbish表示"垃圾"，是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故改为rubbish。

　　第九处：去掉of　此处指使我们的家乡变得更加美丽。根据句中的"more"可知，此处修饰比较级，表示程度，故应用a lot。a lot of表示"许多"，修饰名词。