[技法指导]
本单元的写作要求是介绍学校生活,在写作时,需注意以下几点:
1.主题明确,内容充实。如写记叙文必须要交代清楚时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果,避免空乏、笼统的话。通过对人物、事物和景物的描写,表现出故事的主题和作者的思想感情。如写说明文,则要按照某一逻辑顺序把被介绍主体的最突出特点呈现出来,让读者勾画出该主体的最鲜明的特色。
2.层次分明,有条有理。记叙文除了有开头语及高潮性的结尾外,还要注意描写的层次要清楚,挑选一些典型事例或细节加以合理安排,用最简单易行的方法,按时间的先后顺序进行描写。
3.主次分明,详略得当。叙述时还应注意对中心事件和最能表现中心思想的地方要详写,对次要情节要少些,不重要的东西可不写。
黄金表达:教你如何营造亮点
1.Whenever I think back, I still clearly remember what/how ... while I was in senior high school.
2.During my first semester, I was chosen to participate in a(n) ... competition, but ...
3.At first I felt it difficult to learn ... but with the help of ..., I gradually ...
4.Considering ..., I finally made up my mind to ...
5.Encouraged/Inspired by ..., I made a decision that ...
6.It turned out to be less ... than I had expected, which made me ...
7.What I really enjoy doing was ...
8.There was something else that I was pleased about like ...
9.To my great surprise/delight/joy, most of my classmates ...
10.To me, the highlight of my senior high school life was ...
11.We had prepared carefully for the whole ... and we won ...
12.Actually nobody thought that ..., however, we still ...