Unit 4　Films and film events

Part Ⅳ　Writing

　　根据以下信息，写一篇有关《兄弟连》的简介。

电视连续剧(Television

series)名称 《兄弟连》(Band of Brothers)；改编自一部小说。 制片人(Executive producers) Steven Spielberg和Tom Hanks；他们曾在Saving Private Ryan中一起工作过。 相关信息(Information about the series) 十集(10­part television series)；对E连(Easy Company)美国士兵从新兵训练营(boot camp)到战争结束的经历的如实描述(non­fiction account)；着重描述士兵们的共同成长以及个人成长过程。 海报(Poster)宣传 "They depend on each other，and the world depend on them." 　　This 10­part television series focuses on American soldiers of Easy Company in World War Ⅱ，recording their experiences from the training of boot camp to the end of the war.Band of Brothers was originally a non­fiction account of the adventures of Easy Company.The series gives detailed attention to the way that the soldiers grow together as a group，as well as the way that each of them develops individually.Band of Brothers is based on the book and its executive producers are Steven Spielberg and Tom Hanks，who worked together on Saving Private Ryan.

　　In my opinion，this is a deeply moving series，from which you can find the war is cruel and the peace is priceless.Just as the poster says：they depend on each other，and the world depend on them.

　　这是一篇电视剧的简介，本文要点齐全，脉络分明，过渡自然，行文中使用了一些复杂句式，为文章增色不少。

　　(1)The series gives detailed attention to the way that the soldiers grow together as a group，as well as the way that each of them develops individually.

　　这是一个复杂的句子，as well as连接两个宾语，每个宾语之后各有一个定语从句。

　　(2)In my opinion，this is a deeply moving series，from which you can find the war is cruel and the peace is priceless.

　　这是一个含有定语从句和宾语从句的复合句，In my opinion，this is a deeply moving series是主句，from which引导非限制性定语从句，其中，and连接两个名词性从句作find的宾语。

　　下面的句子选自短文中，如果能作以下调整，则文笔会更加生动。

　　句1：Band of Brothers is based on the book and its executive producers are Steven Spielberg and Tom Hanks，who worked together on Saving Private Ryan.

　　句2：Based on the book，Band of Brothers' executive producers are Steven Spielberg and Tom Hanks，who worked together on Saving Private Ryan.

　　句2运用了过去分词作状语，因而句式结构更加简洁易懂。