Writing--慰问信

　　一、关注信(letter of concern)属于应用文的范畴。关注信是作者就某一个问题或一些现象，表达自己对事件的关心，并提出自己的一些看法和解决办法。

　　二、基本结构

　　开头：简单介绍写信的缘由。

　　主体：针对对方问题(如生病等)进行有针对性的鼓励和安慰，并适当提出自己的建议。注意语气一定要委婉，能体现出自己对对方的关切之情。

　　结尾：简单的希望或祝福。

　　1．开头常用语：

　　①I'm shocked/very sorry to hear that...

　　②It was a great shock to hear that...

　　③I just can't tell you how sad I was when I heard that...

　　④I can't tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that...

　　⑤I am writing to express my deep care for you.

　　2．主体常用语：

　　①I understand how you feel now.

　　②I know the way you feel very well.

　　③It's true that attitude decides everything.So you should never give up no matter what happens.

　　④Please let me know if there is anything I can do.

　　⑤If I can be of any help，please don't hesitate to let me know.

　　3．结尾常用语：

　　①I'm looking forward to...

　　②I hope our caring will help to comfort you.

　　③If you need help，please don't hesitate to let me know.

　　④Thank you for trusting me and I'd like to give you some advice.

[满分佳作构建]

　　假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试(美国高考)，心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信，内容包括：

　　1．安慰对方；

2．分析心理压力过大会导致的后果；