[技法指导]
1.以地点为写作对象的说明文必须先确定一个观察点,然后以此为辐射点展开介绍周围的情况。常见的观察点包括进(入)口、中心处、制高点、显眼的事物、典型的特征等。
2.要想给人一个完整清晰的地点概念,并不需要把每一个地点特征都展示出来,而应抓住本地点最有代表性的特征。
3.合理安排说明顺序,有序地介绍说明对象涉及的具体内容。常见的说明顺序有由远及近、由高及低、由大到小、由左及右、由前及后、由外及里等。
4.以地点为写作对象的说明文通常按照"总-分"或"总-分-总"的结构形式展开,也就是先概述说明的目的或说明对象的特征,让读者获得对说明对象的总体印象后,再有序地介绍具体内容。有时,在文末可以用总结性的语句作为文章的结尾。
黄金表达:教你如何营造亮点
1.be located/situated in; lie in; in the north of/to the east of; be just like; look like; as beautiful as a flower; be famous/wellknown as/for; be compared to
2.It covers an area of about ... square kilometers.
3.Its area is ... square kilometers.
4.It has a population of .../Its population is ...
5.The climate is pleasant./The average temperature is .../The hottest months are ...
6.It has many places of interest, such as .../They make the city a tourist attraction both at home and abroad.
7.It's an immense region, with a very varied landscape./It's a wonderful place with ...
8.It really deserves the name of ...
[写作规范]
[题目要求]
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Sarah打算暑期来北京旅游,来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信,简单介绍以下内容:
1.简况:长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺;
2.位置:天安门广场南面;
3.交通:公共汽车17、69、59等路,地铁2号线;
4.特色:步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:步行街pedestrian street;当当车trolley car;地铁subway
[三步作文法]
第一步:搜索词汇
1.询问 ask about
2.超过 more than
3.位于 lie
4.方便的 convenient
5.体验丰富的文化 experience the rich culture