Section Ⅶ　Writing--如何写建议信

　　[文体指导]

　　建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信有可能是写给个人--就遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法，也可能是写给某个组织或机构--就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。

　　基本结构

　　1．首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。

　　2．主体段落：提出具体建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。

　　3．尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，表达希望建议得以采纳，问题得以解决的愿望。

　　1．开头：

　　I'm sorry to know that you have some trouble/difficulty/problems in...after reading your letter.

　　You asked me for my advice on ...and it's my great pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice/tips.

　　Thanks for trusting me.I'd like to give you some advice.

　　I am writing to express my views concerning...

　　I am writing to share some advice on...with you.

　　However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.

　　Here are a few suggestions/tips which I think may be helpful to you.

　　2．给出建议：

　　I feel that it would be more beneficial/helpful if you could ...

　　I would like to suggest that...

　　In my opinion，you should...

　　It is better to...

　　I strongly recommend that you...

It does help if you...