Section Ⅴ Writing--写今昔对比类电子邮件
描写今昔对比时要根据过去的情况和现在的事实组织材料。这类书面表达的一般写作格式为:
1.开头提出主题句(提出什么事情发生了变化)
2.对过去情况的描述(用过去时态,主要是一般过去时)
3.对现在情况的描述(用现在时态,主要是一般现在时)
4.总结句
1.Our school/hometown,as we all know,is not what it used to be.
2.Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five years.
3.Two new buildings have been built and are in use.
4.Now,a large number of trees have been planted,which hold the soil and water.
5.I believe that the life of the peasants will get better and better.
6.I am glad to tell you something about it.
7.Please write to me soon and tell me about your...
8.Compared with the environment...years ago,the present environment has been greatly/significantly...with the efforts...
假设你是某中学的学生李华,最近收到美国朋友Joy的电子邮件。他在三年前参观过你校,听说你校现在变化很大,希望了解发生了哪些具体的变化。请你根据下表提示,给他回一封电子邮件。
三年前 一座教学楼,一个操场,学生1 000多人 现在 1.校园扩建:新建了一座教学楼和一座图书馆,教学楼内有音乐室、美术室、微机房等;
2.学生人数增加到了2 000多人;
3.体育设施与音乐器材配备齐全;
4.绿化了校园。