Unit 5 Music Using language学案
Writing-咨询信
咨询信是指写信人就某一个问题向收信人征求或征询建议,希望收信人就写信人提出的问题给出针对性的解决方法或提出合理的建议。
一、基本框架
1.开头--简单叙述写咨询信的目的或意图,清楚表明要寻求什么样的帮助。
2.主体--言明要咨询的具体问题和存在的困难,并请求对方给出一些建议。
3.结尾--诚恳地提出希望,表达需要得到帮助的迫切心情并表示感谢。
二、增分佳句
1.I'm writing totell you some advice on how to form a music band.
2.Nowadays, bothtraditional and modern music are enjoyed by people in China.
3.For a long time, traditional music has played an important part in people's life.
4.I was at a loss what to do with this situation.
5.I find it really hard to learn English well and I almost lost heart.
6.I would appreciate it if you could give me some precious advice.
7.I'm sorry to trouble you, but I feel that I must write you this letter.
8.Would you like to give me some advice on it so that I can make rapid progress?
[题目要求]
假如你是李华,你打算与你的朋友组建一个乐队。门基乐队的成功给了你很大的鼓舞。但你和朋友对乐队的名字、主唱、乐器的选择及乐队的类型存在分歧,这让你不知所措,你决定给门基乐队写一封电子邮件,告诉他们你的想法,并征求他们的建议,如何才能使乐队更加成功。
注意:可根据内容要点就某一方面或几个方面的问题征求他们的建议。
第一步:审题构思很关键
一、审题
1.确定体裁:本文为咨询信;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第一人称;
3.确定时态:本文的主要时态应用一般现在时态。
二、构思
开头:自我介绍并提出问题。