2019学年度人教版选修八Unit 4Period5using language-写作如何续写故事学案设计
【写作任务】
某英文杂志现举办英语故事续写大赛。请你根据所给故事的开头,展开合理的想象,将故事补充完整。
注意:词数120左右(提示部分不计入总词数)。
Last Sunday I was wandering in the zoo when I noticed a little girl standing alone by the road crying. _______________________________________________________
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【写作指导】
一、审题定调
本写作要求续写一则故事,体裁属于记叙文。大家需要以所给出的时间、地点、人物为起点,将其发展成为逻辑合理、情节和结构完整的短文。
二、谋篇布局
本篇习作可分为三部分:
第一部分:开门见山交代故事的背景(已给出);
第二部分:详细叙述故事的发展和结局;
第三部分:描述"我"的感受。
三、组织语言
就本篇习作而言,第二和第三部分应围绕以下内容组织语言。
1. 第二部分:叙述故事的发展和结局。
普通表达 高级表达 ★I immediately went up to her and asked why she was crying. But she did not want to talk to me.
★I came up and asked why she was crying. However, she refused to answer. Without hesitation, I approached her and tried to find out what had happened to her, but it seemed that the girl had some doubts about my kindness.