Unit 2 The universal language
Part Ⅳ Writing
根据表内信息写一篇介绍Bill Gates(比尔·盖茨)的短文,词数:120左右。
家庭背景 1955年10月28日出生于Seattle一个富裕家庭 主要经历 13岁开始BASIC语言程序设计 17岁时卖出了第一个软件,收入了4200美元 1975年与哈佛同学共创微软 1980年签订协议为IBM提供MSDOS操作系统 1986年3月,微软股票上市。次年,比尔·盖茨一跃成为世界上最年轻的亿万富翁。 参考词汇:股票stock(n.)
Bill Gates was born on October 28,1955 in a wealthy family in Seattle.He was a naughty but gifted child.At the age of 13,he began programming in the BASIC language.By the time he was 17,Gates had sold his first program.The deal brought him US $4200.
Bill Gates and his Harvard classmates founded Microsoft in 1975.In 1980,Gates made an agreement to provide operating system MSDOS for IBM.In March 1986,Microsoft stock went public.The following year,the stock price went up sharply,making him the youngest selfmade billionaire in the world.
这是一篇典型的人物简历文章,以时间为线索,有条理地将人物的发展展示出来。尤其侧重于微软公司的创办及其发展壮大,突出他的成就--成为世界上最年轻的亿万富翁,从而使其形象鲜活地显现出来。
(1)By the time he was 17,Gates had sold his first program.
在本句中,by the time引导时间状语从句,体现了作者对语言灵活运用的能力。
(2)The following year,the stock price went up sharply,making him the youngest selfmade billionaire in the world.
在本句中,making him the youngest selfmade billionaire in the world 作结果状语,说明作者对非谓语动词的掌握非常到位。
下面的句子选自短文中,若能作以下调整,表达会更好。
句1:In 1980,Gates made an agreement to provide operating system MSDOS for IBM.
句2:In 1980,Gates signed an agreement to provide operating system MSDOS for IBM.
在句2中,用"signed an agreement"代替了句1中的"made an agreement",表达更加准确严密。