7.一些人反对戒烟。(主系表)
Others__are_against_banning_smoking.
8.他们认为吸烟有助于工作,能给吸烟者带来放松的感觉。(宾语从句)
They_think_that_smoking_can_help_people_do_well_in_their_work,_and_bring_them_a_sense_of_relaxation.
9.吸烟能增加政府的烟税收入。
Smoking_can_bring_the_government_a_lot_of_money.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用not only ...but also ...连接句3、4
People_who_are_in_favour_of_banning_smoking_think_that_no_smoking_not_only_avoids_many_kinds_of_diseases_but_also_can_improve_people's_health.
2.用who引导的定语从句连接句7、8
Others_who_are_against_banning_smoking_think_that_smoking_can_help_people_do_well_in_their_work,_and_bring_them_a_sense_of_relaxation.
第五步:过渡衔接联成篇
Chinese_government_has_decided_to_ban_smoking_in_public_places_across_the_country._But_at_present_there_are_still_a_lot_of_discussions_about_whether_smoking_should_be_banned.
People_who_are_in_favour_of_banning_smoking_think_that_no_smoking_not_only_avoids_many_kinds_of_diseases,_but_also_can_improve_people's_health.Banning_smoking_will_help_our_government_save_a_lot_of_money_from_the_cost_of_curing_the_diseases_caused_by_smoking._Besides,_banning_smoking_can_help_construct_spiritual_civilization_and_improve_the_population_quality.
Others_who_are_against_banning_smoking_think_that_smoking_can_help_people_do_well_in_their_work,_and_bring_them_a_sense_of_relaxation._Meanwhile,_smoking_can_bring_the_government_a_lot_of_money.
Smoking_is_harmful_to_health,_as_is_known_to_us_all._As_a_student,_I_am_on_the_side_of_banning_smoking.