第二部分：具体描述事情的发生、发展以及结果。

普通表达 高级表达 Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to ... With graduation approaching, my classmates and I shared the same idea of ... We spent a whole week collecting material. During the week, we ... Material collecting took us a whole week, in the course of which we ... Though we had several debates, the video was perfect when it was finished. However, the video turned out perfect after many changes. 第三部分：表达自己的感受或对事件的评论。

普通表达 高级表达 ★I was very happy about the success.

★I've learned a lot from this activity. ★The success surely gave me a great sense of achievement.

★This activity was really meaningful and I benefited a lot from it. 【范文展示】

普通范文

I'll never forget the experience of making a video with my classmates before graduation.

Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to make a video to record our experiences at school. We spent a whole week collecting material. During the week, we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of our school life. Then we started the hard editing part. Though we had several debates, the video was perfect when it was finished. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received.

It was the first time for us to make a video. I was very happy about the success.

高级范文

One of my most unforgettable experiences was making a video with my classmates before graduation.