2020版高考新创新一轮复习英语北师大版学案:写作 第二编 扩充句——告别瘦削骨感·美在意韵丰满 Word版含解析
2020版高考新创新一轮复习英语北师大版学案:写作 第二编 扩充句——告别瘦削骨感·美在意韵丰满 Word版含解析第3页

  Learning_your_keen_interest_in_Chinese_culture,_I suggest you apply for Peking University, one_of_the_best_universities_in_China.Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where_you_can_be_completely_soaked_in_Chinese_profound_history_and_rich_culture.

  扩充策略(二) 铺上红地毯再出场--补加语句

  补加语句是常见的"增加细节"的方法,这可以使文章显得错落有致,这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章读起来铿锵有力,从而使作文在内容上更加连贯、丰满。下面介绍补加语句的几种技法:

  

目的 充实文章,增强连贯性 方法 根据行文走向,适当增加一些与主题相关的语句,或由要点衍生的句子,既起到前引后联的作用,又能补充一些相关信息,帮助阅卷者理解所写内容。同时,还能协调句式,避免句式单调的问题 特色 协调句式,结构多样   

  

  技法1 列举具体的实例进行补充说明

  ①我喜欢读书。

  I like reading books.

  →I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.

  ②我要花一些时间和父母在一起。

  I'll spend some time staying with my parents.

  →I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework.

  ③我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。

  I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.

  →I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. If possible, we can travel together or share traveling experiences.

  技法2 增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容

  ①我有时去村西的小河游泳。

  I go swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.

  →I go swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then. The water in the river is very clear.(背景渲染)

→Weather permitting, I go swimming in the river of the west of the village now and