London is a capital city full of art and history, an important political centre and a huge financial market place.

　　→London, a capital city full of art and history, is an important political centre as well as a huge financial market place.

　　②伦敦是一个"乡村集散地"，每个地方都有自己的特色和自己的社区，因此要全面描述伦敦是很困难的。

　　It is difficult to describe London in every aspect, for the city is made up of a collection of villages, each of which has its own character and community.

　　→As a city made up of a collection of villages, it is difficult to describe London in every aspect, for each of the villages has its own character and community.

　　2．基本句式

　　①金融广场是伦敦最古老的地方。

　　The Square Mile is the oldest part of London.

　　②并不是太多的人居住在那里。

　　There are not many people living there.

　　③每天30万人在此工作。

　　300,000 people work there every day.

　　④伦敦西区是繁忙的购物和娱乐区。

　　West End is the busy shopping and entertainment district.

　　⑤伦敦东区包含伦敦港。

　　East End contains the Port of London.

　　⑥那是移民最先到达的地方。

　　It is the place where many immigrants first arrived.

　　⑦在伦敦成功举办了2012年奥运会。

　　The Olympics were successfully held in 2012 in London.

　　⑧当地人希望这个区的住房、教育和工作机会能够得到改善。

　　The local people hope that housing, education and employment for many people in this area will improve.

　　第四步：句式升级造亮点

　　1．用定语从句及with的复合结构连接基本句式中的①②③

　　The Square Mile is the oldest part of London，where there are not many people living with 300,000 people working there every day.

　　2．用while及which引导的定语从句连接基本句式中的④⑤⑥

　　West End is the busy shopping and entertainment district while East End contains the Port of London, which is the place where many immigrants first arrived.

3．用whose引导定语从句连接基本句式中的⑦⑧