2019年英语新同步浙江专用必修五讲义:Unit 4 Section Ⅴ Writing— 新闻报道 Word版含解析
2019年英语新同步浙江专用必修五讲义:Unit 4 Section Ⅴ Writing— 新闻报道 Word版含解析第3页

  Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua_are_students_from_Class_Three,_Senior_Two.

  2.2018年5月1日,他们去阳光敬老院做志愿工作。(and连接的并列句)

  On_May_Day,_2018,_they_went_to_Sunshine_Nursing_Home_and_did_some_voluntary_work.

  3.他们给老人送鲜花和水果。(主谓宾结构;present)

  They_presented_the_elderly_with_flowers_and_fruits._

  4.他们立即开始干活,比如擦窗户和拖地板。(such as)

  They_started_working_at_once,_such_as_cleaning_the_windows_and_sweeping_the_floor.

  5.他们坐在院子里和老人聊天。(主谓结构;and连接并列句)

  They_sat_in_the_yard_and_chatted_with_the_elderly_people.

  6.老人非常感激他们的友善。(主谓宾结构;kindness)

  The_elderly_people_thanked_them_for_their_kindness.

  7.他们说:他们将永远记住这美好的一天。(say+宾语从句;such ... that ...)

  They_said_it_was_such_a_beautiful_day_that_they_would_remember_it_forever.

  8.志愿者活动给别人带来欢乐并且丰富了自己的生活。(主谓宾结构;bring joy to, enrich)

  The_voluntary_work_has_brought_joy_to_others_and_enriched_their_own_lives.

  第四步:句式升级造亮点

  1.用同位语改写句1后和句2合并为一个句子

  On_May_Day,_2018,_Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua,_students_from_Class_Three,_Senior_Two,_went_to_Sunshine_Nursing_Home_and_did_some_voluntary_work.

  2.用现在分词作状语改写句5

  They_sat_in_the_yard_chatting_with_the_elderly_people.

  3.用what引导主语从句改写句8

  What_they_did_has_brought_joy_to_others_and_enriched_their_own_lives.

  第五步:过渡衔接联成篇

  Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

  On_May_Day,_2018,_Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua,_students_from_Class_Three,_Senior_Two,_went_to_Sunshine_Nursing_Home_and_did_some_voluntary_work.The_moment_they_arrived,_they_presented_the_elderly_with_flowers_and_fruits_and_started_working_at_once,_such_as_cleaning_the_windows_and_sweeping_the_floor._Everything_done,_they_sat_in_the_yard_chatting_with_the_elderly_people.

  When_it_was_time_for_them_to_leave,_the_elderly_people_thanked_them_for_their_kindness.They_said_it_was_such_a_beautiful_day_that_they__would_remember_it_forever.

Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua_were_very_happy.What_they_did_has_brought_joy_to_others_and_enriched_their_own_lives.