I_look_forward_to_reading_more_articles_about_improvement_of_service_in_your_newspaper.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用分词作状语的句式改写句2
Having_reached_home_and_read_it_carefully,_I_found_several_pages_were_missing.
2.用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句4和句5
No_matter_what_the_staff_says,_it_is_clear_that_the_dictionary_is_of_low_quality_and_the_service_is_worse,_which_has_had_an_effect_on_me_and_will_be_harmful_to_the_other_consumers.
第五步:过渡衔接联成篇
Dear_editor,
I_am_writing_to_complain_about_a_bookstore_and_its_service._Last_week_I_bought_an_EnglishChinese_dictionary_in_a_bookstore_near_my_home._Having_reached_home_and_read_it_carefully,_I_found_several_pages_were_missing._So_I_went_to_the_bookstore_to_require_for_a_replacement._However,_the_staff_of_the_bookstore_turned_down_my_request_rudely.
No_matter_what_the_staff_says,_it_is_clear_that_the_dictionary_is_of_low_quality_and_the_service_is_worse,_which_has_had_an_effect_on_me_and_will_be_harmful_to_other_consumers._As_we_all_know,_today's_market_calls_for_better_service._But_some_services_fail_to_achieve_the_standard_and_the_quality_of_the_staff_needs_to_be_improved.
We_should_do_everything_we_can_to_protect_the_consumers'_rights_and_interests.
I_look_forward_to_reading_more_articles_about_improvement_of_service_in_your_newspaper.
Yours_faithfully,
Sam