为使各项内容衔接自然，可以适当添加过渡词语。如：firstly, secondly, thirdly ... on one hand ...on the other hand ... when, while, as ... but, however ...because, so, as a result ...

三、结尾 参考句式：

1．In a word, we must eat healthily and take more exercise to keep fit.

2．In short, if we want to keep fit, we must have a good habit and do more physical exercise.

3．As is said above, the healthier we eat, the fitter we will be.

可用来表示总结的短语：in a word, in short, in conclusion, all in all等。

【范文点评】 How to Be Healthy?

①Today, with the fast pace of life and work, people like eating all kinds of fast food.Besides, the convenient vehicles make people keep away from walking.②Because of these，more and more people are confronted with the threat of sub­health, for example, some can't sleep well, some are always feeling tired and so on.

③But how can we change these and keep fit?

④First, I think a healthy balanced diet is very important for everyone.Less meat, fatty and fast food, more vegetables and enough fruit are good for our health.⑤Only when we are in a hurry can we have some junk food, but not often.Second，we should take enough exercise because exercise can keep us energetic all the time.

⑥In a word, the better we get into good eating habits and the more we take exercise, the healthier our bodies will be.

点评：①with介词短语的使用增加了句子的灵活性。②关联词使句子上下衔接自然。

③but领起下文，使文章自然过渡到作者要表达的内容。④first，second序数词的使用使文章清晰地表达出要表达的观点。⑤本句为以only开头的倒装句。不同句式的使用显示出深厚的语言功底，使文章增色不少。⑥总结句的使用使文章首尾呼应，内容充实圆满。

【类题尝试】

当今，有些家长选择用金钱奖励孩子在学习上的进步。请根据以下提示用英语写篇短文。

1．分析这种现象产生的原因及危害(工作繁忙，溺爱孩子，不利于孩子成长......)；

2．你对这种现象的看法。

注意：1.词数100左右；2．可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

One possible version：

Nowadays more and more parents choose to reward their children with money for the progress they have made in their studies.