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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Good morning, everyone! What I'd like to share it with you today is my source of strength. My grandmother died of the incurable illness last year, and I still miss her terribly. I will never see her again, never share a laugh with her and buy her a new scarf. The older I get, the more I realize that love, unconditional love, is rarely. When you lose a grandparent, you lose one of the few persons who love you. So much has happened from my grandmother's death. Time keeps rushed forward. Sometimes I wish I can make it stop. In the chaos of these changing times, my grandmother gave me numerous sweet memory that I can hold on to. I may not always know I'm going, but I will always know where I came. To me, that was a source of great strength.

　　【答案】

　　Good morning, everyone! What I'd like to share with you today is my source of strength. My grandmother died of incurable illness last year, and I still miss her terribly. I will never see her again, never share a laugh with her an buy her a new scarf. The older I get, the more I realize that love, unconditional love, is rarel. When you lose a grandparent, you lose one of the few persons who love you. So much has happened fro my grandmother's death. Time keeps rushe forward. Sometimes I wish I ca make it stop. In the chaos of these changing times, my grandmother gave me numerous sweet memor that I can hold on to. I may not always know I'm going, but I will always know where I came. To me, that wa a source of great strength.

第一处：考查主语从句。what引导主语从句，在主语从句中作share的宾语，故it