1.environment 环境
2.pollution 污染
3.polluted 被污染的
4.do_harm_to 对......有害
5.disease 疾病
6.die_out 灭绝
7.be_responsible_for 对......负责
8.As_far_as_I'm_concerned 在我看来
9.measure 措施
10.punish 惩罚
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.现在,出现了很多环境问题,如大气污染、水污染、沙尘暴等。(there be句型)
Nowadays,_there_are_many_environment_problems_such_as_air_pollution,_water_pollution_and_sandstorms.
2.很多动植物因此而灭绝。(主谓结构)
Many_animals_and_plants_are_dying_out_as_a_result_of_all_kinds_of_environment_problems.
3.人类应该对此负责。(主系表结构)
People_should_be_responsible_for_the_problems._
4.随着社会的发展,越来越多的车辆和垃圾被生产, 更多的自然资源被利用。(被动语态)
With_the_development_of_society,_more_cars_and_waste_are_produced_and_more_natural_resources_are_being_used.
5.这些都使得我们的环境越来越糟。(主谓宾+宾语补足语结构)
These_have_made_our_environment_worse_and_worse._
6.只有这样我们才能拥有一个更好的环境。(主谓宾结构)
We can have a good environment only in this way.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用强调句改写句3
It is people who should be responsible for the problems.
2.用非限制性定语从句合并句4和句5
With the development of society, more cars and waste are produced and more natural resources are being used, which have made our environment worse and worse.
3.用倒装句改写句6
Only in this way can we have a good environment.