highly of. ②What impressed us most is Li Hongxin's deed, ②who made a generous donation of 500 yuan, all his pocket money included/including all his pocket money.

　　From these activities, it can be seen ②that the students in our school are co－operative and full of love and strength, so let's keep the good merits!

　　That's_all_for_the_news_this_week._Thank_you!

　　[技法讨论]

　　本模块的写作任务是写篇新闻报道。旨在使人们对于发生的事情有所了解。

　　写该类文章要注意以下几个方面：

　　1．直奔主题：新闻报道的首段通常要有报道的地点或时间，第一句话常常是文章的导语，通过这句话读者能够了解文章的大致内容和主题。

　　2．要点明确：要报道什么内容应该让读者一目了然。将五个"W"(when, where, who, what, why)交代清楚，写作时可根据写作意图有所侧重。

　　3．文章时态多用一般过去时，人称多用第三人称。

　　4．文章结构：三段论。第一段是文章的导语，点出主题，第二段具体讲述过程，第三段讲述意义，措施等。

　　黄金表达

　　1．An activity, intended to improve ..., was held on the 2nd floor of the library, lasting 2 hours.

　　2．Upon their arrival, they devoted themselves to sth.

　　3．On the early morning of April 3, a big fire, caused by ..., broke out in ...

　　4．Through these activities, we can learn a lot of things that can't be learned in class.

　　5．During this activity, everyone could express himself freely about what he is interested in.

　　 6.This activity offered us a chance to show ...

　　亮点分析：

　　本文层次清楚，语句间衔接自然，句式运用高级，是一篇不错的范文。

亮点一：要点表述层次分明，首段开门见山，第二段首句点明本段主题，符合逻辑。