7．参观完厦大后，你会发现上大学是一件极好的事情。

　　After visiting it, you can find that going_to_university is a wonderful thing.

　　8．你可以去捡贝壳、去追海浪、去海里游泳。

　　You can go_to_pick_up_shells,_chase the waves and swim in the sea.

　　第四步：句式升级造亮点

　　1．用非限制性定语从句把句4和句5连接起来

　　There_is_a_village_called_Zengcuoan,_where_we_can_taste_different_kinds_of_delicious_snacks.

　　2．用限制性定语从句改写句6

　　Xiamen_University_is_a_beautiful_place_which_you_must_visit.

　　3．用形式主语it转换句7

　　After_visiting_it,_you_can_find_it_is_a_wonderful_thing_to_go_to_university.

　　第五步：过渡衔接联成篇

　　This_summer_I_went_to_visit_Xiamen_for_the_first_time.This_journey_left_a_deep_impression_on_me.

　　Xiamen_lies_in_the_southeast_of_Fujian_Province,_and_Gulangyu_Island_is_one_of_the_most_famous_places_in_Xiamen.Thousands_of_tourists_go_to_Gulangyu_Island_by_ship_every_day.There_is_a_village_called_Zengcuoan,_where_we_can_taste_different_kinds_of_delicious_snacks.Xiamen_University_is_a_beautiful_place_which_you_must_visit.After_visiting_it,_you_can_find_it_is_a_wonderful_thing_to_go_to_university.Xiamen_is_surrounded_by_the_sea.You_can_go_to_pick_up_shells,_chase_the_waves_and_swim_in_the_sea.

　　In_short,_what_a_fascinating_city_Xiamen_is!