whenever, put forward)

　　Instead_of_giving_us_answers_immediately,_he_encourages_us_to_think_by_ourselves_whenever_he_puts_forward_questions.

　　6．他是一位学者，我们都非常钦佩他。(and并列句)

　　He_is_a_learned_person_and_we_all_admire_him_a_great_deal.

　　第四步：句式升级造亮点

　　1．用"比较级形式"改写句1

　　Of_all_my_teachers,_there_is_no_other_teacher_who_impresses_me_more_than_Mr_Moore.

　　2．用compared with ...改写句3

　　Compared_with_other_teachers,_Mr_Moore_pays_more_attention_to_his_way_of_teaching.

　　3．用not only ...but also改写句4

　　In_his_opinion,_we_should_not_only_know_"what"，_but_also_understand_"why"．

　　4．用such ...that改写句6

　　He_is_such_a_learned_person_that_we_all_admire_him_a_great_deal.

　　第五步：过渡衔接联成篇

　　Of_all_my_teachers,_there_is_no_other_teacher_who_impresses_me_more_than_Mr_Moore._Though_he_is_34,_he_looks_very_young_for_his_age._And_he's_one_of_the_most_popular_teachers_in_our_school.

　　Compared_with_other_teachers,_Mr_Moore_pays_more_attention_to_his_way_of_teaching._He_tries_various_ways_to_make_his_classes_lively_and_interesting._In_his_opinion,_we_should_not_only_know_"what"，_but_also_understand_"why"．_So_instead_of_giving_us_answers_immediately,_he_encourages_us_to_think_by_ourselves_whenever_he_puts_forward_questions._With_his_help,_we've_learned_how_to_analyze_and_settle_problems._What_a_wonderful_world_of_"why"_he_leads_us_to!

　　He_is_such_a_learned_person_that_we_all_admire_him_a_great_deal.