It_is_no_longer_what_it_used_to_be_three_years_ago.
3.那时候仅有一个教学楼和一个操场。(there be句型)
There_was_only_one_teaching_building_and_a_playground_at_that_time.
4.其中之一是一座新教学楼。(主系表结构)
One_of_them_is_a_new_classroom_building.
5.在这座新教学楼中,有音乐教室、美术教室和计算机教室。(there be句型)
There_are_rooms_for_music,_art_and_computer_teaching_in_the_new_classroom_building.
6.另一个是图书馆,里面有各种各样的图书、报纸和杂志。(where引导的非限制性定语从句)
The_other_is_the_library,_where_there_are_all_kinds_of_books,_newspapers_and_magazines.
7.除此之外,我的学校体育设备和乐器配备齐全。(被动语态;be equipped with)
Besides,_my_school_is_well_equipped_with_sports_facilities_and_musical_instruments.
8.我认为我的学校会变得越来越好,我希望你再次访问我的学校。(宾语从句;并列句)
I_believe_my_school_will_become_better_and_better,_and_I_hope_you_will_visit_my_school_again.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用as引导非限制性定语从句改写句1
As_is_known,_great_changes_have_taken_place_in_my_school.
2.用when引导的非限制性定语从句把句2和句3合并
It is no longer what it used to be three years ago, when there was only one teaching building and a playground.
3.用"in which"引导的定语从句把句4和句5合并
One_of_them_is_a_new_classroom_building,_in_which_there_are_rooms_for_music,_art_and_computer_teaching.
第五步:过渡衔接联成篇
Dear Joy,
I was pleased to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about the changes in my school.
As_is_known,_great_changes_have_taken_place_in_my_school._It_is_no_longer_what_it_used_to_be_three_years_ago,_when_there_was_only_one_teaching_building_and_a_playground._Now_two_new_buildings_have_been_built_and_are_in_use._One_of_them_is_a_new_classroom_building,_in_which_there_are_rooms_for_music,_art_and_computer_teaching._The_other_is_the_library,_where_there_are_all_kinds_of_books,_newspapers_and_maga