4.buy_..._from_.../be_bought_from_...
从......买......
5.be_thankful_to_... 对......表示感谢
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.我国南方地区遭受特大暴雨,结果,一些村庄被淹没。
The south of China was_hit_by_heavy_rain;_as a result, some_villages_were_flooded.
2.在利华中学,有些学生急需书。
In Lihua Middle School, some students were_in_great_need_of books.
3.学生会决定向他们捐书。
The Students' Union decided to_donate_books_to_them.
4.有些学生捐了旧书和辅导材料。
Some students donated_their_used_textbooks_and_coaching_materials.
5.有些学生捐了练习本。
Some students donated_exercisebooks.
6.有些学生甚至捐了新书。
Some students even_donated_new_books.
7.这些书是刚刚从书店买的。
The books were_just_bought_from_the_bookstores.
8.当这些书送到学校时,老师和同学们对我们十分感谢。
When the books were_sent_to the school, the teachers and students were_thankful_to us.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用with的复合结构改写句1
With_heavy_rain_hitting_the_south_of_China,_some_villages_were_flooded.
2.用so连接2、3句
In_Lihua_Middle_School,_some_students_were_in_great_need_of_books,_so_the_Students'_Union_decided_to_donate_books_to_them.
3.用省略句及定语从句连接4、5、6、7句
Some_students_donated_their_used_textbooks_and_coaching_materials,_some_students_exercisebooks_and_some_students_even_new_books_which_were_just_bought_from_the_bookstores.
4.用独立主格作状语改写句8
The_books_sent_to_the_school,_the_teachers_and_students_were_thankful_to_us.
第五步:过渡衔接联成篇
Donating Books
With heavy rain hitting the south of China, some villages were flooded. In Lihua Middle School, some students were in great need of books, so the Students' Union decided to donate