Yours，

Li Hua

　　范文赏析

　　(1)文章开门见山说明自己写信的目的；然后详述自己的优势以及目的，简洁明了，不拖泥带水；最后表达感谢和期盼。

　　(2)运用了firstly ...secondly 等语序标志词，运用了一些较为地道的搭配，in need of, have difficulty doing sth.; enable sb.to do sth....; have a better understanding of ...等，这些都使得这篇短文读起来层次分明、连贯、顺畅。

　　[增分佳句]

　　1．表达申请信写信目的常用语

　　①I'm writing to apply for the position of ...

　　我写信申请......的职位。

　　②I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for ...

　　我写信推荐自己为......的合格人选。

　　③I am interested in ...and wish to enter this significant program.

　　我对......感兴趣，希望加入到这个重要项目中。

　　④I learned on your website that ...

　　我从你们的网站上得知......

　　2．表达个人优势的常用语

　　我获得了......比赛的一等奖。

　　②As an outgoing ...I get along well with my classmates.

　　作为一名外向的......我和同学们相处得很好。

　　③For one thing, I can help ...For another thing, I can improve ...一方面，我能帮助......另一方面，我能提高......

　　④My main specialty is ...

　　我的特长是......

　　3．表达感谢，期盼回复的常用语

　　①If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at ...

　　如果你们认为我适合这份工作，请致电......

　　②I will be grateful/I'd appreciate it if you could ...

　　如果你能......我将感激不尽。

③Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.