then.(相关背景)
②旅行了一周后,他回到了家。
After a week's trip, he returned home.
→After a week's trip, he returned home, tired but very happy.(心理描写)
技法3 增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容
①我要和父母一起去超市购物。
I'm going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket.
→I'm going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket and won't be back until about 5:00 in the afternoon.(增加时间)
②我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。
I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return.
→I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.(增加地点)
[典例观摩悟法]
1.(提醒观众注意)要按时进入电影院。
Be sure to enter the theater on time.
→Be sure to enter the theater on time.Whoever is late will miss the splendid opening.
[分析] 要点句为简单句,补加复合句"Whoever is late ...",通过指出迟到后果的方式引起观众的注意,同时,也使得句式多样,表达丰富多彩。
2.(谈论善款用途)募捐得来的钱将送给最急需的人。
The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need.
→The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need.This will not only help them get through difficulties, but also give them warmth and happiness.
[分析] 通过复合句来增加"较复杂结构",同时也是上一句衍生的"效果":帮助他们战胜困难,还给予他们温暖和幸福。
[专题过关训练]
请适当补加语句,充实下面写作片段
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