2019-2020学年人教版高中英语选修7优化教案:Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing — 建议信
2019-2020学年人教版高中英语选修7优化教案:Unit 1 Section  Ⅴ  Writing — 建议信第3页

  You can enjoy_yourself there in your spare time.

  5.A市的就业机会不如B市好。

  The opportunities for the employment are_not_so_good_as in City B.

  6.由于你是英语教师,我认为这不是问题。

  I don't think it's_a_problem_for_you as you are a teacher of English.

  7.我希望我的建议能得到您的认可。

  I hope my suggestion will meet_with_your_approval.

  第四步:句式升级造亮点

  1.用The reason why ... is that ...连接句1和2

  The_reason_why_City_A_is_more_suitable_to_live_in_is_that_the_environment_as_well_as_the_climate_in_City_A_is_better_than_those_in_City_B.

  2.用where引导的非限制性定语从句连接句3和4

  There_are_many_places_for_entertainment,_where_you_can_enjoy_yourself_in_your_spare_time.

  3.用though引导的让步状语从句连接句5和6

  Though_the_opportunities_for_the_employment_are_not_so_good_as_in_City_B,_I_don't_think_it's_a_problem_for_you_as_you_are_a_teacher_of_English.

  第五步:过渡衔接联成篇

  Dear_Johnson,

  After_a_careful_study_of_the_information_about_the_two_cities,_I_suggest_you_choose_to_live_in_City_A._

  First_of_all,_the_reason_why_City_A_is_more_suitable_to_live_in_is_that_the_environment_as_well_as_the_climate_in_City_A_is_better_than_those_in_City_B._Besides,_there_are_many_places_for_entertainment,_where_you_can_enjoy_yourself_in_your_spare_time._Last_but_not_least,_though_the_opportunities_for_the_employment_are_not_so_good_as_in_City_B,_I_don't_think_it's_a_problem_for_you_as_you_are_a_teacher_of_English.

  I_hope_my_suggestion_will_meet_with_your_approval.

  Yours,

  Li_Hua