Ⅱ高手习作

Twin Towns

The city of Guangzhou and Sydney of Australia became twin towns in may, 1986. There have been exchanges in many ways ever since

　　　Both cities share something in common. Both are the world's famous trading centres as well as busy port cities and belong to the subtropical climate. It is cool in summer and warm in winter with an ever-green scenery and flowers blooming all the year round. So tourism is important to both of them. Every year they attract millions of tourists from both at home and abroad.

　　　However, Sydney lies to the south of the equator, so the season is just opposite to Guangzhou. When it's summer in Guangzhou, it's winter in Sydney. Guangzhou has an area of 7434 square kilometers while Sydney covers an area of 12000 square kilometers. It has a large population of 7251900 in Guangzhou, compared with a population of 4 million in Sydney, where it's less crowded.

Ⅲ名师点评

1. 总体评价：本文作者能很好的把握写对比类文章的技巧。叙述的有条理，符合写作要求。另外，作者在写作中使用了一些较高级的词汇和发杂句型，体现了较强的语言功底。

2. 亮点或采分点：

① 使用了一些较高级词汇，如：exchanges; tourism；attract等

② 使用了常见的短语及句型结构，如：in common; as well as; belong to 等

③ 使用了定语从句等句型结构。（同学们应该学会使用分词短语﹑with复合结构 ﹑﹑ 强调句型﹑ 感叹句 ﹑倒装句和it作形式主语等复杂句型来提高书面表达的得分档次）

Step3即学即练（跟踪联系巩固，自主评估）

根据下列提示，写一篇120字左右的英语短文，介绍电视的发展变化以及对人们生活得影响

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