Dear Jim，

　　I'm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.

　　Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like A Dream of Red Mansions while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.

　　I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it's my pleasure to show you around Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　范文赏析

　　(1)范文首段交代写信目的并表示欢迎；第二段阐述建议他上北京大学的原因及需要做的准备工作；最后一段表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章一气呵成、要点齐全且衔接流畅自然。

　　(2)文中运用了如"unforgettable, be soaked in, profound, as for"等高级词汇；句式方面的高级表达有：I would like to express my warmest welcome ...恰当运用了不定式作宾语；Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture恰当运用了现在分词作状语；one of the best universities in China作同位语；where you can be completely soaked in恰当运用了定语从句； it's my pleasure to show ...中it用作形式主语。

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　　1．表达建议信写信目的常用语

　　①I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.

　　我写信给你一些建议/忠告。

　　②I am writing to express my views concerning ...

　　我写信是要表达我关于......的看法。

　　③You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.

　　关于......你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。

　　2．表达建议常用语

　　①I think the most suitable ...for you is ...

我认为对你来说最适合的......是......