三、组织语言(正文部分)
1. 第一部分:学校的基本信息。
普通表达 高级表达 ★... is a provincial key high school.
★... was set up / founded in ... and is one of the best middle schools in ... ★Founded / Set up in ..., ... is a provincial key high school, which is ranked in the top 5 ... in ... 2. 第二部分:硬件及软件设施。
普通表达 高级表达 ★... is not very large, but very beautiful.
★There're some gardens and trees ... ★The school, though not very large, with some gardens and trees, is very beautiful. ★... is in the center of ...
★There are more than 1,000 students studying there. ★In the center of the school stands ..., where more than 1,000 students study. ★... is to the east / west of ...
★It has ... ★To the east of ... is ..., with ... ★There is a big playground south of ... and we can ... ★South of ... lies a playground, where we can ... 3. 第三部分:对学校的评价。
普通表达 高级表达 ★I am proud to study in such a nice school.
★It gives me great pleasure to study here. ★Studying in such a nice school is something I take pride in.
★I've gained great pleasure from studying here. 【范文展示】
普通范文
Dear Henry,
I'm glad you're going to come, and it's my pleasure to introduce my school to you.