②他是一位著名的中国游泳运动员。
He is a famous Chinese swimmer.
③使他真正出名的是2015年8月6日他获得了第16届世界游泳锦标赛100米自由泳冠军。
It made him really famous that he won the gold medal in men's 100m freestyle at the 16th World Aquatics Championships on August 6th, 2015.
④这使他成为亚洲第一位获得此项目冠军的人。
It made him become the first Asian swimmer to win a gold medal in this event.
2.句式升级
⑤用过去分词短语作状语连接①②句
Born on March 6th, 1993 in Henan Province, Ning Zetao is a famous Chinese swimmer.
⑥将句③改为what引导的主语从句,并用非限制性定语从句与④句连接
What made him really famous was that he won the gold medal in men's 100m freestyle at the 16th World Aquatics Championships on August 6th, 2015, which made him become the first Asian swimmer to win a gold medal in this event.
第三步:连句成篇
Born on March 6th, 1993 in Henan Province, Ning Zetao is a famous Chinese swimmer. He started to learn to swim at an early age and joined the Navy's swimming team when he was fourteen years old. In 2014, he won a gold medal in men's 50m freestyle at the 17th Asian Games. What made him really famous was that he won the gold medal in men's 100m freestyle at the 16th World Aquatics Championships on August 6th, 2015, which made him become the first Asian swimmer to win a gold medal in this event.
With good psychological qualities and a modest character, he will surely have a promising future in the field of swimming.
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