写作要求是写一篇人物介绍。写作时应注意下面三点:
1.确定文体:这是一篇人物介绍。写作时注意人物介绍的写作特点。
2.主体时态:文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
3.主体人称:由于是介绍人物,所以人称应该以第三人称为主。
联想词汇
1.在......岁时at the age of...
2.加入队伍join the team
3.因为because of/as a result of/thanks to
4.获奖win the award
5.中国女排the Chinese Women Volleyball team
6.参加take part in
句式升级
1.郎平,出生于1960年12月10日,是著名的排球教练。
Lang Ping was born on Dec.10th,1960 and she is a famous volleyball coach.(and连接的并列句)
Lang Ping,who was born on Dec.10th,1960,is a famous volleyball coach.(who引导的定语从句)
2.她在十三岁时开始练习打排球。
She began to play volleyball at the age of 13.(at the age of...)
She began to play volleyball when she was at the age of 13.(when引导的状语从句)
Lang Ping,who was born on Dec.10th,1960,is a famous volleyball coach and we all admire her very much.She began to play volleyball at the age of 13.She joined the national team because of her excellent performance in the national volleyball game.She was so hardworking that she won a lot of awards.After she retired from the volleyball team,she became a volleyball coach.In 2016 she took the Chinese Women Volleyball team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games and won the gold medal.She is the first Chinese volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach.