learned how to analyze and settle problems. What a wonderful world of "why" he leads us to!

　　 He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

范文评析：

　　 范文进行了合理的想象和添加，文章的精彩之处是使用了较多的高级句型和词汇，结构紧凑，语意连贯。 如：对于要点"He is lovely"的描述为：Of all my teacher Mr. Moore is one of the one who impresses me most. And he's one of the most popular teachers in our school。对年龄的描写用让步状语从句：Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. 在对其教学方法的描述中用了许多精彩的短语，如：compared with other teachers, pays more attention to，In his opinion, instead of，with his help, not only ... but also ...等。最后用了感叹句What a wonderful world of "why" he leads us to! 以及结果状语从句He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much. 对老师的喜爱崇拜之情跃然纸上。

Step 9 Summary

Retell the passage.

Before meeting Mandela

born began school leave

got a job worried about out of work

After meeting Mandela get ... stay ... joined

the ANC Youth League blow up put in prison

happy realize the dream

Famous saying of Nelson Mandela

In my country we go to prison first and then become President.

- Nelson Mandela

We know too well that our freedom is incomplete without the freedom of the Palestinians.

- Nelson Mandela

I dream of an Africa which is in peace with itself.

- Nelson Mandela

Homework

1. Review the passage and pick out the expressions and sentences that you find difficult.

2. Write down the retelling of the passage.