Yours，

　　 Chris

（三）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(2017·郑州高三质量预测)

I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9.You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me.I had no more choice but to prepare for it，though.The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory，for reading from the paper wasn't allowing.The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank.But my listeners were waiting patient.Gradually，I found me back，giving my speech at last.After what seemed to be a long time，I heard all the listeners applauding loudly.Ever since then，my fear of speak before the audience had disappeared.Actually，now I've become a great speaker!

【答案】　I can still remember I was once asked to make a(∧) speech before the whole class at the age of 9.You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed me.I had no choice but to prepare for it，though.The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory，for reading from the paper wasn't .The real moment began I stood on the platform with my legs trembling my mind blank.But my listeners were waiting .Gradually，I found back，giving my speech at last.After what seemed to be a long time，I heard all the listeners applauding loudly.Ever since then，my fear of before the audience disappeared.Actually，now I've become