Although_his_schooling_adds_up_to_no_more_than_one_year,_he_is_quite_aware_that_knowledge_is_of_great_significance_to_young_people.

　　3．他非常重视我的学习，总是鼓舞我努力学习。

　　He_attaches_great_importance_to_my_study_and_always_encourages_me_to_study_hard.

　　4．父亲为我竭尽所能以确保我全身心学习。(whatever引导宾语从句，in order that引导目的状语从句)

　　My_father_does_whatever_he_can_do_for_me_in_order_that_I_can_concentrate_on_my_study.

　　5．有一次他病重，大夫让他卧床休息几天。

　　Once_he_was_badly_ill_and_the_doctor_asked_him_to_stay_in_bed_for_several_days.

　　6．我回家看望他时，我看到他在地里干活。(when引导时间状语从句)

　　When_I_got_home_to_see_him,_I_found_him_working_in_the_fields.

　　7．我深受感动，禁不住热泪盈眶。(so ... that...)

　　I_was_moved_so_deeply_that_I_couldn't_help_bursting_into_tears.

　　8．这就是我的父亲，一位简朴、诚实、勤劳的人。(such is ...倒装句式)

　　Such_is_my_father,_a_simple,_honest_and_hard­working_person.

　　第四步：句式升级造亮点

　　1．用"despite the fact＋that同位语从句"和as a result of which引导非限制性定语从句把句2和句3合为一句

　　Despite_the_fact_that_his_schooling_adds_up_to_no_more_than_one_year,_he_is_quite_aware_that_knowledge_is_of_great_significance_to_young_people,_as_a_result_of_which_he_attaches_great_importance_to_my_study_and_always_encourages_me_to_study_hard.

　　2．用"to ensure＋that宾语从句"改写句4

　　To_ensure_that_I_can_concentrate_on_my_study,_my_father_does_whatever_he_can_do_for_me.

　　3．用so＋adj./adv.置于句首引起倒装改写句7

　　So_deeply_moved_was_I_that_I_couldn't_help_bursting_into_tears.

　　第五步：过渡衔接联成篇

　　My Father

　　My_father,_who_is_already_in_his_fifties,_lives_in_the_countryside._Despite_the_fact_that_his_schooling_adds_up_to_no_more_than_one_year,_he_is_quite_aware_that_knowledge_is_of_great_significance_to_young_people,_as_a_result_of_which_he_attaches_great_importance_to_my_study_and_always_encourages_me_to_study_hard.

To_ensure_that_I_can_concentrate_on_my_study,_my_father_does_whatever_he_can