4．我用得越多，症状越严重。(the＋比较级 ... the＋比较级．..)

　　The_more_I_used_it,_the_worse_the_symptom_became.

　　5．这种面霜，严重影响了我的生活和工作。(主谓宾)

　　The_cream_greatly_affected_my_life_and_work.

　　6．我要求该公司退掉面霜、支付医疗费用并严肃调查此事件。(主谓宾；and 连接的并列谓语)

　　I_want_to_send_back_this_cream,_meanwhile_your_company_should_pay_for_the_cost_of_medical_service_for_my_treatment_and_look_into_the_matter_seriously.

　　第四步：句式升级造亮点

　　1．用which引导的非限制性定语从句升级句1

　　In_your_advertisement,_you_claim_that_the_cream_has_a_range_of_special_materials_and_is_safe_and_effective,_which_can_keep_the_spots_out_of_the_face.

　　2．用强调句式改写句5

　　It_was_the_cream_that_greatly_affected_my_life_and_work.

　　第五步：过渡衔接联成篇

　　Dear_manager，

　　I'm_writing_to_complain_about_your_awful_product_"No_spot"_cream._In_your_advertisement,_you_claim_that_the_cream_has_a_range_of_special_materials_and_is_safe_and_effective,_which_can_keep_the_spots_out_of_the_face.

　　The_first_time_I_applied_it_to_my_face,_I_followed_the_instruction_carefully._To_my_surprise,_the_next_morning,_I_felt_my_face_tickling_as_if_something_were_crawling._And_during_the_following_days,_the_more_I_used_it,_the_worse_the_symptom_became._And_it_was_the_cream_that_greatly_affected_my_life_and_work._And_I_was_aware_of_being_cheated.

　　You_have_guaranteed_that_your_products_are_safe_and_never_have_you_mentioned_the_side_effect._I_want_to_send_back_this_cream,_meanwhile_your_company_should_pay_for_the_cost_of_medical_service_for_my_treatment_and_look_into_the_matter_seriously._If_not,_I'm_intended_to_accuse_your_company.

　　I'm_looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you.

　　Your_sincerely，

　　Li_Hua