3.creature 生物
4.witness 见证;目睹
5.target 目标;靶子
6.be/become_aware_of 意识到的
7.consider 考虑
8.stop/prevent 阻止;防止
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.在过去的五年中鲸鱼的数目急剧减少。
The number of the whale has_sharply_decreased in the past five years.
2.在全世界鲸鱼成为非法捕猎的主要目标。
The whale has_been_the_main_target_of_the_illegal_hunt_in the whole world.(target n.)
→The whale has_been_targeted_by_the_illegal_hunt in the whole world.(target v.)
3.一旦生态平衡遭到破坏,我们将遭受很多灾难。
Once the balance of nature is_destroyed,_we will suffer a lot.
4.曾经有段时间我们没有意识到植物的重要性。
It_was_a_time_when_we_were_not_aware_of the importance of plants.
5.干旱和洪水同时到来。
Drought and flood went_hand_in_hand.
6.如果我们不阻止非法海洋捕捞,我们将失去我们的家园。
If we did_not_stop the illegal hunt in the ocean, we would_lose_our_home.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用witness改写句1
The_past_five_years_has_witnessed_the_sharp_decrease_of_the_whale.
2.用独立主格结构改写句3
The_balance_of_nature_destroyed,_we_will_suffer_a_lot.
第五步:过渡衔接联成篇
Dear_Sir_or_Madam,
I_am_writing_to_complain_that_the_illegal_hunt_for_ocean_creatures_is_becoming_bad_to_worse,_as_a_result,_the_past_five_years_has_witnessed_the_sharp_decrease_of_the_whale_because_it_has_been_the_main_target_of_the_illegal_hunt_in_the_whole_world.
The_balance_of_nature_destroyed,_we_will_suffer_a_lot._It_was_a_time_when_we_were_not_aware_of_the_importance_of_plants,_and_then_drought_and_flood_went_hand_in_hand._If_we_did_not_stop_the_illegal_hunt_in_the_ocean,_we_would_lose_our_home.
We_trust_that_you_will_now_consider_this_matter_seriously_and_make_an_effort_to_prevent_the_recurrence_of_this_kind.
Yours,