2019-2020学年人教版高中英语选修7优化教案:Unit 3 Section Ⅴ Writing — 投诉信
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  3.creature 生物

  4.witness 见证;目睹

  5.target 目标;靶子

  6.be/become_aware_of 意识到的

  7.consider 考虑

  8.stop/prevent 阻止;防止

  第三步:由词扩句雏形现

  1.在过去的五年中鲸鱼的数目急剧减少。

  The number of the whale has_sharply_decreased in the past five years.

  2.在全世界鲸鱼成为非法捕猎的主要目标。

  The whale has_been_the_main_target_of_the_illegal_hunt_in the whole world.(target n.)

  →The whale has_been_targeted_by_the_illegal_hunt in the whole world.(target v.)

  3.一旦生态平衡遭到破坏,我们将遭受很多灾难。

  Once the balance of nature is_destroyed,_we will suffer a lot.

  4.曾经有段时间我们没有意识到植物的重要性。

  It_was_a_time_when_we_were_not_aware_of the importance of plants.

  5.干旱和洪水同时到来。

  Drought and flood went_hand_in_hand.

  6.如果我们不阻止非法海洋捕捞,我们将失去我们的家园。

  If we did_not_stop the illegal hunt in the ocean, we would_lose_our_home.

  第四步:句式升级造亮点

  1.用witness改写句1

  The_past_five_years_has_witnessed_the_sharp_decrease_of_the_whale.

  2.用独立主格结构改写句3

  The_balance_of_nature_destroyed,_we_will_suffer_a_lot.

  第五步:过渡衔接联成篇

  Dear_Sir_or_Madam,

  I_am_writing_to_complain_that_the_illegal_hunt_for_ocean_creatures_is_becoming_bad_to_worse,_as_a_result,_the_past_five_years_has_witnessed_the_sharp_decrease_of_the_whale_because_it_has_been_the_main_target_of_the_illegal_hunt_in_the_whole_world.

  The_balance_of_nature_destroyed,_we_will_suffer_a_lot._It_was_a_time_when_we_were_not_aware_of_the_importance_of_plants,_and_then_drought_and_flood_went_hand_in_hand._If_we_did_not_stop_the_illegal_hunt_in_the_ocean,_we_would_lose_our_home.

  We_trust_that_you_will_now_consider_this_matter_seriously_and_make_an_effort_to_prevent_the_recurrence_of_this_kind.

Yours,