With graduation approaching, my classmates and I shared the same idea of making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting took us a whole week, in the course of which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of our school life. The editing part after that was tough. However, the video turned out perfect after many changes. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received.

It was the first time for us to make a video. The success surely gave me a great sense of achievement.

【亮点赏析】

1. 两篇范文的结构都很清晰，衔接紧凑，故事完整。

2. 高级范文中使用了很多看似简单但表达很恰当的词汇，如：approach, share the same idea, in the course of, tough, turn out, a great sense of achievement等。

3. 高级范文中使用了更多复杂的语法结构，如：动词-ing形式作表语，"with +名词+动词-ing形式"结构，定语从句等，所有这些都给文章增色不少。

【实战演练】

假设你是李华，上周末你们班到某农村小学开展了志愿者服务活动，你深有感触。请你用英语写一篇短文，描述此次活动过程并说明你的感受，然后发表在你校英语网站上。

注意：词数100左右。

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答案

　　I'll never forget my first volunteer work last weekend.

Our class went to a primary school in a village to help the students there. Since they needed easy access to reading materials, on arrival, we gave away some books to