I would appreciate your kindness very much if you can offer me the opportunity to be interviewed.

(二)句式升级

4．I was studying in the Foreign Languages Department of Shanghai Fu Dan University.

I just graduated from the university two years ago.(用定语从句合并句子)

I was studying in the Foreign Languages Department of Shanghai Fu Dan University where I just graduated from two years ago.

5．I have gained some working experience.

I have worked as a secretary in a small company since my graduation.(用名词性从句合并句子)

I have gained some working experience that I have worked as a secretary in a small company since my graduation.

[妙笔成篇]

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Dear Sir/Madam，

　　I am so glad to learn from the advertisement in the English newspaper that your joint venture (company) is in great need of a secretary.I am interested in the post，so I am writing this letter to apply for the job.

　　I am an unmarried young man (lady)．I am 1.78 (1.68) metres tall.I majored in English when I was studying in the Foreign Languages Department of Shanghai Fu Dan University where I just graduated from two years ago.I have been working hard at and have passed the TEM­8.Besides，I have won the first or second places

in the Spoken English Competition several times.I think I am good at not only written English but also spoken English.What's more，I have gained some working experience that I have worked as a secretary in a small company since my graduation.

I would appreciate your kindness very much if you can offer me the opportunity to be interviewed.