8.apply_for;_ask_for 申请
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.我想申请在《人才周刊》上刊登的秘书这一职位。
I_would_like_to_apply_for the position of secretary advertised on Talent Weekly.(过去分词作后置定语)
2.我即将从浙江大学毕业。
I will_graduate_from Zhejiang University.
3.我在那儿专修国际贸易。
There I major_in International Trade.
4.我擅长文字处理。
I_am_good_at word processing.
5.它让我具备了做好这个工作的能力。
It_equips_me to do well in the position.
6.我热情乐观。
I'm_enthusiastic_and_optimistic.
7.那让我能和同学们相处的很好。
That makes me get_on_well_with_my_classmates.
8.如果您能够给我一个机会,我会尽最大努力做好本职工作。(if引导状语从句)
If_you_give_me_a_chance,_I will try my best to do my duty.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.将句1改为含定语从句的复合句
I_would_like_to_apply_for_the_position_of_secretary_which_is_advertised_on_Talent_Weekly._
2.用where引导的非限制性定语从句连接句2和3
I_will_graduate_from_Zhejiang_University,_where_I_major_in_International_Trade._
3.用非谓语动词作结果状语连接句4和5
I_am_good_at_word_processing,_equipping_me_to_do_well_in_the_position.
4.用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句6和7
I'm_enthusiastic_and_optimistic,_which_makes_me_get_on_well_with_my_classmates.
5.用"祈使句+and+陈述句"改写句8
Give_me_a_chance,_and_I_will_try_my_best_to_do_my_duty._
第五步:过渡衔接联成篇
Dear_Sir/Madam,
I_would_like_to_apply_for_the_position_of_secretary_which_is_advertised_on_Talent_Weekly.
I_will_graduate_from_Zhejiang_University,_where_I_major_in_International_Trade.