London_is_a_capital_city_full_of_art_and_history,_an important political centre and a huge financial market place.
→London, a_capital_city_full_of_art_and_history,_is an important political centre as_well_as a huge financial market place.
②伦敦是一个"乡村集散地",每个地方都有自己的特色和自己的社区,因此要全面描述伦敦是很困难的。
It is difficult to describe London in every aspect, for_the_city_is_made_up_of_a
_collection_of_villages,_each of which has its own character and community.
→As_a_city_made_up_of_a_collection_of_villages,_it is difficult to describe London in every aspect, for_each_of_the_village_has_its_own_character_and_community.
2.基本句式
①金融广场是伦敦最古老的地方。
The_Square_Mile_is_the_oldest_part_of_London.
②并不是太多的人居住在那里。
There_are_not_many_people_living_there.
③每天30万人在此工作。
300,000_people_work_there_every_day.
④伦敦西区是繁忙的购物和娱乐区。
West_End_is_the_busy_shopping_and_entertainment_district.
⑤伦敦东区包含伦敦港。
East_End_contains_the_Port_of_London.
⑥那是移民最先到达的地方。
It_is_the_place_where_many_immigrants_first_arrived.
⑦在伦敦成功举办2012年奥运会。
The_Olympics_were_successfully_held_in_2012_in_London.
⑧当地人希望这个区的住房、教育和工作机会能够得到改善。
The_local_people_hope_that_housing,_education_and_employment_for_many_people_in_this_area_will_improve.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用定语从句及with的复合结构连接基本句式中的①②③
The_Square_Mile_is_the_oldest_part_of_London,where_there_are_not_many_people
_living_there_with_300,000_people_working_there_every_day.
2.用while及which引导的定语从句连接基本句式中的④⑤⑥
West_End_is_the_busy_shopping_and_entertainment_district_while_East_End_contains_the_Port_of_London,_which_is_the_place_where_many_immigrants_first_arrived.
3.用whose引导定语从句连接基本句式中的⑦⑧