2019学年度外研版选修八Section ⅤWriting——如何写诗评学案设计(4页word版)(1)
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  3.meaningless 毫无意义

  4.long for peace 渴望和平

  5.touch my heart 打动我的心

  Ⅱ.巧用模块语法和句型

  1.这是一首伊拉克儿童写的一首诗。

  This is a poem.It was written by an Iraqi child.(用分词作定语合并句子)

  This is a poem written by an Iraqi child.

  2.虽然描写简明扼要,但是这首诗的意义却很丰富。

  The description is simple and to the point.The meaning of the poem is rich.(用状语从句合并句子)

  Though the description is simple and to the point,the meaning of the poem is rich.

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  【参考范文】 

  This is a poem written by an Iraqi child.We are shown,rather than told that Iraq is at war.The child's father has gone to the battlefield for their freedom.Iraqi people are suffering a lot from the war.To a small child war seems meaningless,but father means much to him and the family.They are longing for the peace.The poem touches my heart.It truly brings tears to my eyes.One obvious meaning of the description is that how much peace means to a country and its people.

Though the description is simple and to the point,the meaning of the poem is rich.They have to be separated at the moment,however,they still have the hope in