三、组织语言
第一部分:说明故事发生的背景,点明主题。
普通表达 高级表达 ★... an old craftsman gave us a lesson on how to make dough figurines.
★... our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines. ... we had a meaningful and rewarding lesson given by an old craftsman. 第二部分:描写故事发生的过程。
/ 普通表达 高级表达 图1 ★... the old craftsman came into the classroom with a large tool box.
★We gave him a warm welcome. ★... an old craftsman with a large box was invited to our class.
★We greeted him with thunderous (雷鸣般的) applause. 图2 ★First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.
★We stood around him and watched carefully. ★He sat down to show us how to make dough figurines. It was patient of him to explain every step.
★So attentive (留心的) were we that we quickly mastered the method ... 图3 Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. ... started to make our own "artwork", while the craftsman walked among us giving us instructions. 图4 ★Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.
★Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited. ★... we all finished our pieces and took pictures with the old craftsman.
★... a sense of excitement immediately filled the classroom.