★I immediately went up to her and asked why she was crying. But she did not want to talk to me.

★I came up and asked why she was crying. However, she refused to answer. Without hesitation, I approached her and tried to find out what had happened to her, but it seemed that the girl had some doubts about my kindness. After I showed her my ID card and student card, she seemed to believe that I was trying to help her. After showing her my ID card and student card, I convinced her that I was just trying to offer help. She told me that she had lost her mother in the crowd while she was watching monkeys. She told me that she had got separated from her mother while she was watching monkeys. I asked her for her mother's phone number, but she couldn't remember it at all because she was too worried. I asked for her mother's phone number; however, she couldn't remember it due to her anxiety. After a long and patient talk, she remembered it. By giving her patient guidance, I got her to recall it. Seeing ... was all right, ... thanked me a lot / was very thankful to me. Seeing ... safe and sound, ... expressed her gratitude to me. 2. 第三部分：描述"我"的感受。

普通表达 高级表达 Helping the girl made me happy. I had never had a good feeling like that. Though it was just a small matter, the smile on their faces made my day! 【范文展示】

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Last Sunday I was wandering in the zoo when I noticed a little girl standing alone by the road crying. I immediately went up to her and asked why she was crying. But she did not want to talk to me. After I showed her my ID card and student card, she seemed to believe that I was trying to help her. She told me that she had lost her mother in the crowd while she was watching monkeys. I asked her for her mother's phone number, but she couldn't remember it at all because she was too worried. After